into the mushroom

its in the progress but all comments welcomed for ending :D

 

            It was early spring morning, with dew kissed grass. The kind of morning that made the day seem much more magical. Claire got out of bed, groggy and her hair it a mess. The moment she realized what day it was she sprang out of bed and pulled on her favourite cow sweater (even though it was in the laundry, Claire said it didn’t even smell bad). And her pink polka dotted pants, brushed her teeth and hair. Today was her 6^th birthday and she went down stairs singing and skipping, something only a 6 year old girl can do. “Happy birthday sweetie” said Claire’s mother. She didn’t even touch her toast and jam, for she was far too excited to eat. Claire pulled on her bag kissed her mom on the check and said good bye and she skipped towards the bus stop. As she was walking to the bus stop she saw a simple dusty brown mushroom. She was intrigued but couldn’t waste time for the bus will be coming soon.

            Little did Claire know was that that mushroom held a secret that would make her special day far more fantastical. In that mushroom was a door, a door that was soon to be opened.

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            After school Claire cut her cake with her mother and opened her present, a new doll. “It’s off to bed now, so you can be rested for your party”. At night that same mushroom that Claire had seen started to split. And out came a puff of glitter. Why people were unaware of this I don’t know. Out came a pink hoof, then four pink hooves, till a miniature unicorn came out. Its horn glowed and it grew to the size of your average Shetland pony. Abella the unicorn wasn’t here to make a simple visit, she was here to explain to little Claire of her great role in the land of Nefrioli.

            Abella flew to Claire’s window opened it and woke Claire up, and hastily explained to her about herself.  “You, mean I have to leave my home and live in Nefrioli? But I’m not sure...” in the end Claire did leave with Abella. She placed her basic needs in bag, got on Abella’s back and flew into the mushroom.

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No one can actually prove that Abella and Claire came back, for all we know Claire is a grown woman now ruling Nefrioli, for she never did come back home. That night when Claire and Abella left, was a warm and rainy. Some people say that they could see a girl on a flying horse. But for all we know it was just a rainy night that will leave dew kissed grass the next day.

             

Reviews

[Jess Holden]

I love it :D Its so happy