personal escape

Dark room dull candles

Painted circle drawn

Five points five spirits

A dull hush

Then,

Darkness

Eerie chills swirl

A heavy presence comes over

Rustles

They are coming near

I brace my self

This ends now

Blow out the candles

Eyes shut tight

Arms out stretched

My pulse slows

This is my escape

Reviews

[Katannaism]

Ellipses here and there could really make the words really jump out. And maybe put some commas to pause between words;so that it won't really feel mashed up. But nonetheless, a great piece.

[onceafaerietale]

I love this

[Butterfly Ninja :3]

thanks but i think the rhythms quite off haha poems not my forte XD

[Jess Holden]

dark, but amazing imagry