Spaces

Soulful feeling of spaces everywhere!

A billion molecules
Scattered around
Flying through emptiness
In vacuum abound

A billion colored images
Floating in recesses
Of the spaced out mind
Indulging in excesses, waiting
To know which one expresses?

Spaces... in time
Between people and places,
Spaces... in moments
In words and sentences

Spaces... in music
Silent pregnant pauses
Saying not one word 
Yet a billion applauses

Spaces... between you and me
Across the earth, the vast seas
Expanding now, closer the next
A breathing new life form
Red running in its veins

Spaces... momentary commas
Passing through time, a silken sheet
Weaving in all there is to life
Embroidering one way, burying another!

Where'd lie fluidity, if no space 
Where'd breath be, to rise in grace
Or to break the running pace  
Oh where would we all be,
In this vast space, without space!

Author's Note

Could the poem take you into a different space?

Reviews

[DearSweetAgony]

Yes,I love this write.
EPIC JOB!

[MIngram]

Spaces... in music
Silent pregnant pauses
Saying not one word
Yet a billion applauses

This was my favorite stanza as well. This entire poem makes me think way too much in a good way. Very deep.

Spaces... in music
Silent pregnant pauses
Saying not one word
Yet a billion applauses

I really liked this stanza, so very well written, I really loved this one!