Well it did make me laugh! Well done Limerick. Content was good, rhyming was good......syllables a litte out but that's ok, you made a mighty effort here my friend! A very worthy contest submission, thank you so much for joining in!
For the edification of others who are not sure what the format is, here is the form requirements for limericks.
A limerick is a humorous poem consisting of five lines.
The first, second, and fifth lines must have seven to ten syllables
while rhyming and having the same verbal rhythm.
The third and fourth lines only have to have five to seven syllables,
and have to rhyme with each other and have the same rhythm.
It all sounds very complicated but once you get the hang of it, it's smooth sailling!
Here is a link you might like to take a peek at poets
HAHAHA! Perfecto. Reminded me of Shel Silverstein.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Who can forget Uncle Shelby? Thanks for reading.
Devanshu
9 Years Ago
Yes, I was feeling down few weeks back and I kept on reading his books. I felt better, keep it up. L.. read moreYes, I was feeling down few weeks back and I kept on reading his books. I felt better, keep it up. Looks like, I am gonna find another favorite writer here.
It was funny alright..!
liked the rhymes..i actually sang it and it sounded really good
the syllables maybe werent all matched up but it flowed along nicely
good work:)
ps: sorry for the late review, was occupied with work
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Sorry that syllable count was not perfect. Glad you liked it.
Devanshu
9 Years Ago
Don't be it's a good one...and for the syllables try singing it out..that sort of helps me sometimes.. read moreDon't be it's a good one...and for the syllables try singing it out..that sort of helps me sometimes :)
Well it did make me laugh! Well done Limerick. Content was good, rhyming was good......syllables a litte out but that's ok, you made a mighty effort here my friend! A very worthy contest submission, thank you so much for joining in!
For the edification of others who are not sure what the format is, here is the form requirements for limericks.
A limerick is a humorous poem consisting of five lines.
The first, second, and fifth lines must have seven to ten syllables
while rhyming and having the same verbal rhythm.
The third and fourth lines only have to have five to seven syllables,
and have to rhyme with each other and have the same rhythm.
It all sounds very complicated but once you get the hang of it, it's smooth sailling!
Here is a link you might like to take a peek at poets
Devanshu: I enjoyed it....I did laugh and you present a great visual. Don't know if I'd want to eat the eggs or bread. Thought about cave men and lack of fire: Think they had too much hair. Don't even know the style or format for a limerick. Great work and please keep writing. Thank you...Dale
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Please do see the review of Mrs. Helena. You will know much about Limerick.
You also .. read morePlease do see the review of Mrs. Helena. You will know much about Limerick.
This is definitely interesting. I've never written a limerick (not sure how to/what the format is), but I enjoy the picture that was created with what you have here. Nice work, thank you for sharing :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Please have a look of Mrs. Helena's review. You will get to know about Limericks.
Tha.. read morePlease have a look of Mrs. Helena's review. You will get to know about Limericks.
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