The Third Eye

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The third eye sees when you tell your mother that you drunk the milk,

But it had gone into a flower pot.

 

The third eye sees when you say: “homework is chopped by my dog!”,

But it had not.

 

Third eye notices when you break the pot,

And blame your little brother.

 

Third eye sees when you eat pancakes,

When your parents went outside.

 

Third eye sees when you say you are doing your homework,

But you are reading comics.

 

The third sees when you watch television,

More than you’re supposed to be.

 

Third eye sees,

Which we don’t see.

The third eye sees,

Which you don’t want to show.

 

Author's Note

Beware! May be the third eye is watching you!

Reviews

[Pax]

I can only see three possibilities:

One is the own self’s reflection- the one will always see's the truth of what you do… can be a state of conscience but i believe some people doesn't have that treat... so i can tell to those person who create the mirror self-reflecting images in the mind... there are many types of human consciousness and it holds the key of all the truth we hold on into..

Second one is the government spy gadgets – like Big brother is always watching us… even in the internet all our mail have been filtered for terrorist messaging… I have studied about that on how the government filters all the information around the sea of information(internet)… our privacy is always invaded like freedom is constrained.

Third is God – in the spiritual aspect I always knew God is always watching us, he works in a very mysterious ways… his the only higher being who can see pass through the façade we portrayed- he will always see the real you…

Awesome work my friend!

[Devanshu Rajput]

I totally agree with your all possibility.

Really God, Self's reflection and Government can spy anyone.

I really appreciate your words.

Thanks for reading.

Take care

Devanshu

[Pax]

your most welcome :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup, this makes sense.

[Aehr]

Very well written. :) I liked the way you used the third eye to bring across your point.

[Dark Rider]

That is a good poem. It makes one rethink their actions before doing something that might not be right. Good job. :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks for the review

[Dark Rider]

You're welcome. :)

[Akshita]

reality can be seen in ur writing......
gud job....

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks for reading

[ANTO]

I thought immeadiately that the third eye in this context is our conscience but it also seems to be greater than us - is our conscience greater than us ?? I'm getting out of my depth already.
Thought-provoking piece Devanshu. Well done.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thank you very much....i'm glad to get your response!

Take care

Devanshu

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine poem, I understand the third eye to be the parents, or conscience, or both...good work.

[Blue Belle]

Amazing poem that really makes you think!

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks

Devanshu

[InsanityWriter]

Quite true. ;) Nicely put.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks for reading.

Devanshu

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, we are being watched!

[Devanshu Rajput]

True.

Thanks for reading.

[Dr. Wood ?]

if the third eye is watching ME..it will be bored..all I do id go to work and then come here to write....But the third Eye COULD be conscience maybe it is this eye that keeps some folk on the straight and narrow....The third eye is more than that though...It is more than CCTV.......It exists everywhere

[Devanshu Rajput]

:)

Devanshu