Limerick-2

In my effort to make you laugh

A man with different name gear.

His hair sadly caused him fear.

In it lived ten cats.

Two elephants and three bats,

Hundreds of Giraffe and a deer.

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

That is some head of hair. I am happily bald by choice! Well done!

[Mike Emil]

a man has different gears
good menagerie, you got for yourself
HAI!

[gombeggar]

much obliged for yer sharing this with us all

[Peter H]

well well this is quite the humourful one ;)

[Peter H]

the king of the jungle the lion , hmmmmmmmmmm this is quite a elusive one :)(

[dw817]

That's what I call a =DO= ! (Or a Don't) Did he have a permit to keep all those animals up there ? *Grin*
Awesome Limerick !

[Dark Rider]

This was funny. A good thing to read in the morning. I liked it. Good job. :)

[ShelleyA]

A well penned limerick. I like the humor. Good rhyming which I always enjoy. An enjoyable read. Write on.Thank you for sharing.

[Devanshu Rajput]

I'm glad that people are liking my attempt. Thanks for reading.

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome.

[Dayran]

Was the man's name Noah? Couldn't have been easy for his barber.

[Devanshu Rajput]

I also think.

May be he did't have money to go to a barber.

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Devanshu

[Aethereal]

That was an inspiring limerick to read. It inspired me to write this gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Hair Problem

Jake was filled with fear.
In his hair, there sat
hundreds of small deer,
elephants and cats.
Also staying here
were giraffes and bats.
All would disappear
in soap mixed with fats.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Wow....wow.....Really a nice gift.

I am glad that you liked it.

Nice to meet you.

With kind regards.

Devanshu