Limerick-2

In my effort to make you laugh

A man with different name gear.

His hair sadly caused him fear.

In it lived ten cats.

Two elephants and three bats,

Hundreds of Giraffe and a deer.

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

And here come the bear.
With four cups and a beer.

This was fun.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks for reading and stopping by. I am glad you emjoyed it.

Devanshu

[Shivam Murari]

Anytime

[Helen Crutchett]

Yes, laughing so much here! Good one Devanshu!

[Devanshu Rajput]

Well, you horrified me there, now you are laughing here? That's not fair! Lol!

Thanks for reading and stopping by.

Devanshu

[Helen Crutchett]

No, its not really fair! :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

Yes, How can you do this to me. It is criminal. :0

Devanshu

[Miss Sharon]

The content in this write is adorable and brought me a big smile! ~Sharon

[Devanshu Rajput]

I am really thankful of your kind words....I am happy that I was able to bring smile upon one's face.....

Devanshu

[MOON]

Lovely , made me smile , thanks for reviewing my poem.

[PurpleQuartz]

Made me laugh! I really like it :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

I really gleefully thank you to spare some words of yours on the carved words of mine.

[wordwarrior]

Oh my goodness, he'd never be able to brush or comb his hair! This made me smile. A most enjoyable Limerick!

[OTownPete]

He must have one helluva time dragging a comb through that mane. Your friend in words, Pete

[Devanshu Rajput]

lol! Thanks for reading! He didn't dare to drag the comb :)

[Pax]

I think its really amusing... the imagery is the real trick here, it's a clever idea my friend.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I appreciate it.

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This is really short witty poem. I appreciate, indeed a Limerick.

[Devanshu Rajput]

I am glad that you liked my limerick.

Thanks for reading.

Devanshu

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson]

You are welcome.

[Constance Payne]

That is just too funny. It made me smile and gather a picture in my mind.....love it.