Haiku-1

enjoy my first Haiku

                

  Water flows like music

Cold breeze seems to dance

Mountain stands alone there

 

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

While the count could use work, the content and words are beautiful. Like you said, it's your first one. I mess up my count all the time. Some I correct the count and some I just leave to stand alone without the Haiku or Senryu attachment. It is all up to you since this is your vision and words. Thanks for sharing beautiful words.

[Akshita]

ur imagination is awesome...keep doing it...

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks :)

[Mark]

very nice. I like this one.

[Devanshu Rajput]

I appreciate it:)

[Akashi]

:) Keep up the good work!

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks akashi:)

[Akashi]

You're welcome.

[Natalie Larson]

Very peaceful :) I really enjoy this.

[Devanshu Rajput]

I truly admire your words :) thanks.......

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

nice images for reflection

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks friend for the kind words

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

nice images for reflection

[Pax]

i remember this.... ;) the sight you painted reminds me when i go to the mountains and feel the cool breeze of the air that surrounds me... when i do that it always makes me feel closer to mother nature...

a wonderful haiku m friend..
100~

[Devanshu Rajput]

Oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Pax thanks for another appreciations on my words......i had no exceptions from the piece but after you edited it for me......i posted it here.............thanks.........

[Pax]

my pleasure...

[Devanshu Rajput]

:)

[Baby Ricochet]

I was there. Great Haiku.

[Devanshu Rajput]

THANKS AGAIN

[Coyote Poetry]

Good vision was create by the Haiku. You used the words with skill and with purpose. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks sir for your kind words..............

[Writer #00]

A picture in three lines. Well done...interesting color choices.

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks for your both reviews which were really appreciable....

[Writer #00]

You're welcome and thank YOU for sharing. :)