Oh! It Started Raining

a brief about rain

             

Dense clouds cover the shining sun.

The morning is turning into night.

Winds blow fast; pretty umbrellas are seen 

outside.

Animals run to the shelter.

The hot day is vanishing they say.

The thundering sound, lightening in sky scares; I hid under my desk.

All doors are shut and windows are closed, 

mine too.

OH! It started raining!

The fine smell of dust. What a pleasure!

It’s only cool and cool.

It’s becoming heavy with every boring  

second.

Today my friends didn't come to play.

Has someone forgotten to close tap in the 

sky?

The window is full with droplets.

The sun glows again in the clear sky.

Rainbow smiles with seven colors. What a scenario!

OH! It stopped raining!

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[TurtleClark]

strangely this made me smile

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thankx for reviewing

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A stiring piece that relates to the reality of what is happening wiht our weather around the world, well done, good read.

[Devanshu Rajput]

thankx again. Always appreciate you.

[quinfinn]

i knew a family in Florida who were tornado shocked. every time they saw a cloud in the sky they would all run and hide in the closet. it was ridiculous. this poem tickled that memory for me when you hid under your desk.....very funny. nice write indeed, quite enjoyable

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks for review.

[kublakhan27]

I love weather-related poetry, and you've injected some very nice and unique images into this one...well done^^

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks for it

[Mariam]

Very nice...so pleasant to read,I like the imagery :)

[Holly Mason]

very good imagery..
hiding under your desk-cute*)
like the way you have set it up-mother nature uses many colors many ways it reminds me of that
glad it stopped raining ...could you please do something about the snow*)
thank you for sharing

[Devanshu Rajput]

always love to read your reviews. Will Get something about snow soon:)

[Dayran]

Playing in the rain Devan?

[Cara]

loved it,amazing one
really great, thank you forsharing :D

[Devanshu Rajput]

thankx for ur kind review.

[Cara]

:D

[Time's The Bond]

Nice I liked it

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks