Honey, oh let it Bee

i hate you 

i hate you

i hate you

i hate the way you 

look at me- 

and smile

and can't i help, but to smile too?

i hate you, and the way you walk

the way you make me walk

the way we walk in step

and i hate you and your eyes

which look into mine so honestly,

so honestly, why aren't you honest with me?

i hate you and the way you instigate me

without being instigating

because you won't even look at me-

unless i'm instigating.

i hate the way you hold my hand

a second too long

in self defense

and yet it's such a perfect

offense, against

all the accusations of 

classroom flirtations-

cause i'm the one who started it.

and i hate the way you ask me

whatcha doing, like you care

about all of my activities

and when i ask if you'd care

to join in my activities

you're much too busy, little bee

please stop stinging me

with gentle touches, given casually

and daring looks, which look too long

and stupid remarks, which can be read four ways

because you're taken by some other

HoneyBee Queen

and while I'm sure I'm very

entertaining

This has gone too far, for me

my heart aches, with the length of this longing

please let me be. 

Please stop teasing me.

 

Author's Note

Written May 2010

Reviews

[Haseo]

great poem , but i didn't get the feeling that its made for a peom, more of a Rock or R&B song.
great work any way .

[Kamran Javed]

well written

[Cynthia Man]

I was attracted here by the title, and I really love this poem,
hate is pretty much what we go through everyday,
and I agree that we can't stop hating a "bee" .
Anyways, a nice flow!~ Love It!~ :D