Break down

Do you get some sick pleasure of hurting me?

Hurting everyone?

What are you...

Who are you?

 

I don't know anymore;

You're a mirror

A mirror of all our feelings,

You reflect them straight back at us.

 

We're sad; you're sad.

What are you doing?

You break me down

You rip me to shreds

 

For what?

What is your aim?

What is your goal?

Do you like breaking me into pieces?

 

Who are you trying to impress?

Me?

Her?

Yourself?

 

No one cares

No one listens

No one can hear you

You're dead

 

You're dead inside your self

You don't even know who you are anymore

Do you?

You're broken.

Reviews

[Desmund Tiny]

This poem has a powerful impact to the reader...great piece

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A powerful piece....
questions make it that by virtue of adding intensity...
Terrific..

[stars are far]

This was so nice and poweful
and my best line is :"You're dead inside your self"