As a lonely girl.

As a lonely girl, 
I have not been many places.
In my lonely life,
I have seen very few faces. 

As a lonely girl, 

I only want one thing.

All I want, 

Is to end my own life.

As a lonely girl,
The only one could change my lonely mind.
Is someone I could trust,
Someone who is warm and kind.

As a lonely girl,
I want someone to hold.
Some who will love me, 

And be there without being told.

As a lonely girl,
This was all I wanted…

Reviews

[KurKota]

I really like this write, alot. Firstly, I like the structure, and the repetitive style. I tend to do that also, so I suppose that is why I respond to "As a lonely girl". Next, I feel the loneliness too, even in a crowd. I think it is difficult for some people to understand that one can be lonely in a crowd. "Being there without being told".....beautiful phrase! Reading this, makes me wish I could be the one to be there, and hold you.

[Akshat♥]

I am a lonely boy...and i know these feelings..
i am also searching for true love..still far behind..
life is really bad sometimes..this poem is so sad..
yet impressive..i love it!!
Keep writing:)