Monster.

You think you know me?
You don't know the half of it.
You think you scare me?
I'm just pushing back the wrath again.

I'm a beast inside soon you'll see.
That you don't know the smallest part of me.

Pushing against the walls within.
I'm living in anger,
And drowning in sin.

Just one drop of blood is all I need.
To finally set free,
The evil thing inside of me.

I whisper the words of death in your ear
Your muffled cries,
That no one will hear

I hold your head up till I see your throat.
I sink my teeth in until you choke.
Your eyes roll back inside of your head.
One look at you and I hope you are dead.

Now you're the victim,
And I'm the haunter.
One look at him,
And I know I'm a monster.

Reviews

[Dove]

wow!!! this is an interesting piece. I like it and the message was definately heard

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

You've expressed the intensity of the monster superbly, it conveys the scary message perfectly!!!!!