Sometimes.

 

Sometimes I wake up crying,

Screaming out your name.

Hoping, wishing, praying,

But it was all in pain.

 

Sometimes I solo my heart out,

Thinking about the memory of your face.

Reminising of the life we had,

Compared to the now lonely, empty space.

 

Some days I feel much stronger,

Go all day, don't shed a tear.

But the majority of the time,

I exist in constant pain and fear.

 

Continuing on this journey,

From heaven down to hell.

Will it ever get better?

Or too far have I fell?

 

Sometimes I find myself,

Sitting in the corner of my room.

Shaking, screaming, crying,

Absorbed in all our gloom.

 

Sometimes I glimpse at my reflection,

Of the pathetic sole I have become.

The scared little girl you have left,

And out of my own skin I want to run.

 

And sometimes I have too stop myself,

As I feel my world slowly slip away.

And remember that you are now gone,

And that I will never be okay!

Reviews

[The Ink Chapters]

Good poem, and very relatable. The rhyming scheme didn't always flow as smoothly and I thought I might give some suggestions.
In the first paragraph I felt it would be more powerful to change it was all in pain, to it was all in vain. It stills fits the rhyming scheme but to me makes more sense.
The second part is when you say I live in constant pain and fear. "I live in constant fear" follows the syllables needed to flow in the rhyme.
"Or too far have I fell" is a awkward sentence. Maybe "or is it too far I have fell." These are just suggestions; I love this poem and think you have amazing talent! Keep it up

[Dove]

i like this poem, never stop writing, youre amazing