Thoughts

Thought at night aren't always sweet.

I lay in bed
Where I am half dead
Thinking of my life
And all my thoughts of suicide
I feel so numb
So broken and dirty in the inside
I wish I could take this meaningless life
Of mine
But I can't I am a coward
I wish to die
But I can't even do it by my hand

Author's Note

Thoughts of suicide. Beware!

Reviews

[KirstMind]

love the intensity of this piece.

[destiny soto]

Thanks😁

[JC]

You have some commonality with those French guys of old like Baudelaire, there can be something profound in misery and you can get some poetic depth from it,this is straight to the point and real so I dig it.

[destiny soto]

Thanks you a lot for taking time and reading Thoughts, glad you like it😄