Never Ending

Broken.

Shattered.

Lost.

It doesnt matter what word you use.

They all mean the same thing.

It doesnt matter if your smiling from ear to ear.

Deep down, your still that broken human being.

Your still the person that hurts 24/7.

The person who gets annoyed at everyone.

Who yells and cries constantly.

The person who sleeps until three.

Or, doesnt sleep at all.

No one; nothing, can help you.

Youll always hate life.

Even at your highest points.

Youll always be looking for that missing piece.

Youll always be searching for a way out.

Forever.

 

Reviews

[Anjali]

Wow.... The emotions are coming out of this piece so much! I loved it. You just explained a broken person's state so well! This is going in my favorite list for sure.

[Siddhartha]

The poem perfectly captures two emotions - pity and anger, or is scorn the word that I am missing out on? Either ways nicely done my friend. :)

Note - Was writing you're as your and you'll as youll done on purpose? It makes sense but just exactly how, I am unable to put my finger on.

[Distant horizons]

I know that feeling. Perfectly captured.