Back and Forth

Im starting to see the flicker.

That flicker of hope.

Like everything will be okay again.

 

Im starting to feel the spark.

That spark of energy.

Like my whole life can just re-begin.

 

But... i still just wanna lay here.

Like nothing matters.

That rope; it keeps pulling me back.

 

My body still aches.

Like tiny stabs all over.

Its like my soul is under attack.

 

My whole life, shattered and abused.

All of these feelings.. Just leave me confused.

 

I no longer know what i want.

I guess they call it, "feeling blue".

All that i want to know is.. what do i do?

 

 

Reviews

[eatmills]

Find the little things and work from there. You can't run until you can crawl.

I really liked the form in your poem. The similes are really good. One small spelling mistake in the first line and rid yourself of the comma after 'but' use this "..." instead.

Still a really good write, thanks for the share.

[Distant horizons]

Wonderfully done. The inner struggle that is life is beautifully captured in your words