it's simpler than that..

realizing the person you want to be may be simpler than we think ...

The world is big with lots of places to go

and full of obsticals and challenges to help you grow

but no matter what happends no matter what you decide to do

never give up on your dreams and always be you

we try so hard to find out who we are

we keep wishing for the future when it isnt that far

we try so hard to find that place we fit in

we lie we fight we hide and we sin

but one day we'll realize its simpler than that

some of us are shy some misunderstood some fat

but thats what makes us who we truely are

that one in a million that shining star

and until that day comes when we finally realize

i'll be here with open ears and ready for your cries

Author's Note

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Reviews

[DeliriousCerises]

You've really stuck to your theme you presented in your title. This was wonderful. It's just as simple and being who we are, and being the best versions of ourselves. I'm not really sure what to say about this poem, you've seem to say it all. A little piece of me is bothered by the fact that "i'll" in the last line needs to be capitalized, but that really doesn't matter, the overall message, flow, and simple rhyme scheme just fit together so perfectly, that this poem is marvelous.

[Cole Hayley]

very powerful and very well written. It flows oh so good. Great piece :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

This is powerful and I love it. The depth and understanding of life so perfectly put. So many try so hard to understand “life” they make it all twisted and misinterpreted….to clarify the truth in your poem. It’s simpler than that. Perfect! I can’t wait to read more.