The World on a String

sometimes i feel like the world is so complicated when the awnser to all our problems is right in front of us...

 

They tell you to rap they tell you to rhyme
They tell you to wait you'll see it in time
A diverse world full of multi-colored creatures
Sinners and liars and beggars and preachers
The world on string falling apart
You want it to change then put in some heart
"it" made the world as some kind of creation
But it turned out as an abomanation
An unidentified cause of pain and of hate
It isn't for you but for some its too late
Give it a chance don't give up now
Dont ask your self why ask your self how
Many have died fighting for change
It's not out of reach its just within range
Grasp on tight hold on to your hope
There isnt a need for another nuse in a rope
The world is real but its full of fakes
So listen to me learn from my mistakes
I learned to love I learned not to hate
I learned that your life isn't decided by fate
I learned to wait to not push and shove
I learned how to hate and I learned how to love
- xoxo Destiny

Author's Note

let me know what you think :]

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"I learned to wait to not push and shove
I learned how to hate and I learned how to love "
The lesson stated above take years for most of us to learn. Most of us will fall down many times. I like the story and the strong ending to the poem. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rachael Day]

i LOVE this!! It's so well written. I may love it so much because i'm a sucker for poems that rhyme but this flows really really well. And i love the message too. this is one of my favourites!! :) Keep writing!!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

A diverse world full of multi-colored creatures
There isnt a need for another nuse in a rope
I love your poem and want very much to read more of them..........soon?

[nigrum homonculus]

i like this, pretty awesome. love the meaning and style. well done.

[V.J.C.]

i really liked this poem,there is deep emotions. The flow of the poem is nice,thank you for the read.