River of serenity

The river of serenity

Slowly creeping tore’s my feet

I can breathe in this air

But still hold this hate

I can stand on the edge

But still feel this way

Take away the pain I feel in this life

I am tired

And done for

Losing all hope

Losing everything I cannot hold onto

Including you

My mind is cluttered with the facts

That I am worse

My hands are shaking with the fear of desperation

My heart is melting

Within the heat of the sun

Now that i know what i have done

Author's Note

i wrote this when i was a little heart broken.

Reviews

[obvious pseudonym]

it's a very good poem full of emotion. that's how most great poets write. i enjoyed reading it. welcome to writers cafe :)