Story To Tell

Story To Tell

A Story by Derek Nall
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We all have a story.

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There's a story behind it all, behind the curtains and blankets we cover ourselves in
Over the mountains and rooftops we shout to believe it
So before the curtains close again, just breathe, breathe it in, 
Don’t you forget to tell your story…somebody is listening. 

Were all born with a compass that leads through the paths of many hearts
Through open doors that may never open again, sometimes you cant go back… 
Through seas of heartache, that we pray will never overtake us
And through the leaves of the fallen trees…cut down
But we still float to the ground
With a story to tell

© 2013 Derek Nall


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Excellent description of what we all face as Human Beings.

Posted 11 Years Ago


You have a very good concept here, and there's definitely a lot of directions you could go with it. You use some very good imagery here but I do feel like this is a little incomplete, or at least that's the vibe this gives off. I think you ought to work over this and perhaps expand a little - there's definitely room for it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Derek Nall

11 Years Ago

I do agree...thanks for the feedback.

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Added on March 21, 2013
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Derek Nall
Derek Nall

Colorado Springs, CO



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Just a simple guy who likes to put thoughts into paper planes, let them fly and make words rain...hoping to find a spot into your heart. more..

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