Autumn's fall

Autumn's fall

A Poem by Deon Visser
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Spending a year in a country with no real weather changes except; summer and summer-with-rain, inspired this poem, a fact which only dawned upon me when infinite summer ended as I left.

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Hither and thither the mild wind woes,

slowly caressing your precious throws,

leaves of Autumn scuttle on air,

creep and crawl, once fallen, if dared,

Summer turns hazy in Hazel and Oak,

browner than branch bass scattered and broke.

 

Seasonal shifts reveal Fall to fuss,

over twigs, trunks and trees,

in evergreen,

distrust.

 

Wither and weather stems start to stall,

stomata and sunshine pine away all,

crisply cut quarters of what once stood fair,

winds weep in darkened discoloured air,

naked not nurtured tree-fellow sprawls,

gray gloomy scratches on heaven’s walls.

 

Shifting of season signals the fall,

of titan and tree trunk and the timbered tall.

 

In scarleted carpet and flamed drapery lies,

the promise of tree-kin’s,

deciduous,

disguise.

© 2014 Deon Visser


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I come back to read this twice...Excellent...:)...........

Posted 10 Years Ago


A nice classic feel to this wonderful poem. Pen on...:).............

Posted 10 Years Ago


You hold the great Rhythm. Nice poem, everything's deeply written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on March 1, 2014
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Deon Visser
Deon Visser

Cape Town, South Africa



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I just came off of a writing hiatus that dawned over me for no reason. I won't say it was writer's block, more, that I didn't need to write for the past year. I spent a year in Thailand, and the land .. more..

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