My Hell

A love story of the deepest kind.

Sometimes I wish there was a hell

A place of torture where bad ones dwell

There I'd be though you can't tell

If there were such a hell

If such a place there did exist

I'd be there I must confess

Not because of hardened wrong

It is for not being as strong

A place where I'd be far from you

Is a place where pain is never through

Such torture in my heart would dwell

Without you is worst than that  hell

For in hell I can get out

Someone can hear my screams and shouts

Giving me comfort make me new

Its worst than hell if its not you

 

So I live each every day

Trusting hoping this I pray

That nothing noone finds our way

To stumble trip us come what may

If hell were hot I'd gladly take

Such a choice such a fate

Nothing could ever compare 

To live a life without you here.

Dennis Sobers

Reviews

[Avalonya]

And once again, the poet appears, astonishing the crowd with his wide array!

[dennissobers]

I'm just glad to know there is a forum I can send my work to. I have been writing from the time I was 14 years and have now a collection of over 30 years of poetry that the world have never seen or heard. Thanks

[Avalonya]

Can't wait to hear more, It was the same for me. I spent a few years writing short story so now I'm able to send my work as well, piece by piece.

[dennissobers]

I look forward to writing again.

[Avalonya]

Same here.