Hopelessly Hopeful

Hopelessly Hopeful

A Poem by oldsoul78

If there were ever a day to just be, it'd be with you

I can't explain it, you just have that feel that I do.

Give me your faults and I'll find you a reason it's fine

I don't know you yet but I'm waiting to see what I find.

Maybe you're not who I think and maybe you're not who you think you show

But for now I'll just be hopelessly hopeful that you are what I need to now know

© 2014 oldsoul78


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I love it! I really love the final line, "but for now I'll just be hopelessly hopeful that you are what I need to now know".

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oldsoul78

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! .. I love witty endings

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

175 Views
1 Review
Added on March 9, 2014
Last Updated on March 9, 2014
Tags: love, hope

Author

oldsoul78
oldsoul78

Miami, FL



About
Because sometimes, there's no way to stop these words. Occasional writer, always a dreamer. more..

Writing
Surges Surges

A Poem by oldsoul78


Sanctuary Sanctuary

A Poem by oldsoul78