You - Holding My Heart

for the one I love

I want to hold your hand within mine,

for eternity, until the end of time.

Time is relative,

but my time with you is relevent,

and unless I'm with you I'd rather be celebate.

Celebrating every moment we share,

living freely,

wholey,

and without care.

I want to not only hear,

but understand your thoughts.

Beacause without you

the fight has been fought.

Fighting to guideour destiny to follow our hearts,

but even the rest of me including my head

says to me - 

You,

Yes you,

are the best for me

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow! that’s how I feel about this girl; what to say to a person, I think you’ve done a great job here in expressing those feeling I mean right down to the letter. Excellent write.