A God without measure

How 'big' is God????

DEMVESTER,’I SPEAK OF A GOD WITHOUT MEASURE’

I sat by the sea and sighed with a song in my heart   

The awesome sight of the sea sent a signal of praise to my heart

The sea in its state confirms the omnipotence of a God without measure

I tried to measure the length of the sea with pleasure

But I had no tape measure

Even if I had one, I couldn’t have measured the size of the sea without heart pressure

Because the sea told me ’I can’t be measured’

What a God who never censures but gives His love without measure

You are such an awesome God!! such an awesome God without measure!!

Reviews

[Jack Wolfe]

I enjoyed the simplicity in which this was written, and couldn't agree more with your message, the glory of God is indeed immeasurable. the only problem I had with this was the constant repetition, which caused a disruption in the flow.

[demvester4deworld]

Thanks so much for your comments! I appreciate it so much and hope to do more and better!..Your views are always welcome!

[Lady Glitter]

I just love the easy, peaceful flow of the lines. I especially like these,
"The sea in its state confirms the omnipotence of a God without measure."
"Even if I had one, I couldn’t have measured the size of the sea without heart pressure."
"What a God who never censures but gives His love without measure."
This is a beautiful verse of reverence and appreciation for God, and a great message of God's unmeasurable love for mankind. And yes, nature does speak to us with the voice of God, just as the sea told you, "I can't be measured."

[Dannyisawriter]

How true! And despite that most the rhymes were repeated words, it had a really good flow :)