Condensation's Imprint

The kiss of breath

basked in my skin,

reluctance lingering,

in condensation’s

imprints,

unique of pebbled atoms

pulsed in through reservoirs,

colliding a puncture

through submergence,

entwining caves and crests

balanced with

embracing lips,

hips a sway as

swift as the rift

of current.

Author's Note

another very abstract, sorry :/

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Can you repeat please . Nice . Just kidding...

[the Most Human Human]

This is beautiful, you oughta write lyrics for Animal Collective if you've heard of em!

[demureminds]

Oh thank you (:

[Tai Ryens]

Why apologize for being abstract? It's quite the valuable art a writer can paint.

[demureminds]

Because I wrote a very abstract piece once and someone asked me what my point was haha, so I just thought I'd put it out there this time.
And thanks.

[Antonio Valentino]

abstract is my first language.. and you speak it exquisitely..

i understood this fully, for me anyway..

tis wonderful as all other

:)

[demureminds]

Thank you, glad you do. Haha.

[Antonio Valentino]

now if only i understood regular english hahha