The Iris of Longing
A Poem by demureminds
I caught the glimpse
of wistful eyes
in passion,
the iris of longing,
anticipating
the lick of
embrace in arms
of splendor,
grasping hips
of ardor’s cradle,
his pupils
echoing me.
© 2012 demureminds
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his pupils echoing me....
loved that
a wishful gaze locked in speechless sound..
:)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
soytenly.. :))
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I love the title you assign to it, clever use of words.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you (:
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I love the iris of longing and lick of embrace, but this is an amazing little burst of imagery throughout :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you (:
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12 Years Ago
No problem :)
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Added on August 19, 2012
Last Updated on August 20, 2012
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demuremindsSan Diego, CA
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20. California, US. Student: Bio Major. Coffee Enthusiast. Occasional writer. Read if you please. more..
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