Human

His cranium held such secrets,

the crux of enigma flight,

captivating.

His clavicle held such strength,

the lust of ardor,

enticing.

His ribs beared such sorrow,

hoarding the ache of vitals,

admiring.

His humerus throbbed in modest charm,

the clutching of his brawn,

alluring.

His (carpels)(metacarpals)(phalanges) 

coarsed in delicate age,

wandering in affairs,

commending.

His femur disrobed of vigor,

abiding by coached landscape,

dazing.

His (tarsals)(metatarsals) shifted the bales

of his chassis,

lifting the density of anatomy,

baiting.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

you use new and unfamiliar terms so artfully, really well done.

[demureminds]

Thank you, I try really hard to make things not sound forced (:

[Tai Ryens]

I agree with Antonio; your major in biology helps you a great lot in writing poetry. I just love how you use it to your advantage in writing. Amazing.

[demureminds]

Thank you! That is what I'm planning on doing when I finish schooling, write on my down time using what I've learned (:

[Antonio Valentino]

waww your major really is in biology isnt it...

well, no bone to pick here at all.. the scaffolding aligned perfectly along this body of work..

even though it was a vegan piece.. it really did still fill me up and, stick to my ribs..

seriously Melinda, you could write about anything..

thats real talent

:)

[demureminds]

Haha I try, I actually looked up carpals and tarsals, so I cheated :P
Haha thanks, no wonder I always enjoy your reviews, they just shower compliments!

[Antonio Valentino]

omg, why you little cheater hahaha.. compliments only rain when the sky enjoys the view below... :)