Chef

A serving of toast

-ed fib

rubbed in 

with buttered slices,

some fat inducing carbs

for your absorbing mind,

tell me, would you like

corruption in your coffee,

a spoon 

or two of libel,

a receipt of your

conceited vain,

as I scorch these

egg white

lies?

Reviews

[New Dawn]

Great write and the shape of your poem is fantastic - a dish of inverted lies - brilliant- this is really so clever - don't know how you come up with such ideas.

[demureminds]

I have actually reached the point where I have writers block pretty often, so thank you it means a lot knowing I haven't completely lost all creativity (:

[New Dawn]

absolutely no I was mesmerised by this. It was witty and clever and beautifully designed. I have tried on occasion to make my poetry appear visually interesting but to no avail so I am in awe of those who do. Keep writing - we all have our slow times but the inspiration always finds its way back

[demureminds]

Thank you (:

[SHEEMA HUQ]

i like the idea of paraniod consumption ( not in real life of course), very good. You have great style.

[demureminds]

Thanks, you interpreted it how I wanted to portray it haha

[Tai Ryens]

The chef of malice strikes once again; skillfully chopping linguistics into fragments and serving them as dishes made to satisfy the receiver. I love the concept.

[demureminds]

Haha nice description! Thanks haha (:

[Antonio Valentino]

waww.. i think me stick with my eggmacky muffins.. lol

do egg white lies have less cholesterol then the ones with yolks..

i know, i got jokes right.. not.. haha

nice piece here my friend..

:)

[demureminds]

Haha thank you (:

[Antonio Valentino]

eeeww i just ate a egg mcsmacky and it dripped all over aggghhh

i guess the yolks on me huh.. ;)