Asymmetrical, You're Perfect

Asymmetrical, You're Perfect

A Poem by demureminds

I hope you know you’re beautiful,

not your skin,

hair,

face,

legs,

arms,

abdomen,

BODY,

but 

your eyes,

how they journey 

the slopes of emotions,

your smile how they

swoop joys and pass

them along the

telephone line game,

your hopes how they

spread wings of 

broken birds,

your words how they

taste like organic

honey from the comb,

your touch through

space how it alters my life,

even if you don’t know

it.

© 2012 demureminds


Author's Note

demureminds
To whoever may be reading this.

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posed several questions, i wondered if this was ficticious? fantasy? a genuine intimate companion? ah the beauty of this poem...leaves questions unanswered.... ah, but then i notice your generous message...such kindness

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sweet poem that will touch the heart of every guy.

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

Thank you (:
Sweet and inspiring . . . Charming job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

Thanks! (:
oh gosh Melinda, this really was so very endearing.. how lucky it is to find someone that significant and extraordinary..

what a charming and captivating write

:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on August 15, 2012
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demureminds
demureminds

San Diego, CA



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20. California, US. Student: Bio Major. Coffee Enthusiast. Occasional writer. Read if you please. more..

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A Poem by demureminds