Alchemist

If I were an alchemist,

I’d weave towns

of golden people

Their hearts

would be valuable,

heavy with ardor and armor,

their souls radiating light

the color of the basking sun

whilst their eyes allure passion,

immersed in greed

for sentiment,

and their touch secreting 

silky wisp of slipping

chemistry,

never stuck to anyone,

and there would be no

pain,

no dent

when bitten down.

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

whilst their eyes allure passion,
immersed in greed
for sentiment,

ahhhhh.. what a wonderful line... that is why you are one of my favorite poets..

and their touch secreting
silky wisp of slipping
chemistry,
never stuck to anyone,
and there would be no
pain,
no dent
when bitten down.

ohhh.. that was a little sad.. unfortunately bites do leave dents dont they.. although, all bites arent bad..

lovee your writing.. a fan forever..

:)

[demureminds]

Haha aw thank you! (:

[Antonio Valentino]

you are so welcome but it is i who is the grateful one, for you being you..

:)

[Tai Ryens]

Such is a world where everything is perfect, greed is stomached below rather than bragged aloud; and pain isn't existent. In addition, everyone is apathetic, and nothing is felt . . . My preferred method of living~ Great job.

[demureminds]

Thank you(: