Omnitude

I think I’ll keep you

because you send letters that quiver 

the strings in my left chest,

the words jittering out my mouth

like bubbling stimulus drinks

as I pop the cap,

and you sing with your eyes,

your smile dancing beneath

sweet glistening euphonies,

as you strum the tufts 

of your crown with ease,

luring the rain to come

half scorched in sun,

a sunshower,

because you think it’s beautiful too,

half and half,

and we are omnitude.

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

this couldn't be any more adorable in every meaningful way..

how blessed someone would be to have words like these written about them..

you are a poet's poet dear friend..

ever inspiring.. ever affecting..

:)

[demureminds]

Thanks! (:

[Tai Ryens]

May I know what omnitude means? I searched through about four different dictionaries and I cannot seem to discover a meaning. Nonetheless, I did enjoy what little I could fathom of the lines prior to the ending (I cannot assign a view if I am partly blind, am I right?).

[demureminds]

Hmm that is weird, well according to webster it means totality, whole, universally... hmm maybe I should use a new word, Idk I just liked how it flowed with the word.

[Tai Ryens]

Oh, now I get it. I assumed that at first, considering omni means all (I think), but oh well.