I am

I am

A Poem by demureminds

I am crooked smiles

and meaningful glances

raised eyebrows at everyone,

acceptance lurking through

my brain.


I am sinful thoughts,

and kind words of genuity,

maturity causing un-trustful eyes,

and suspicion before first wronged.


I am roaring mind

and silent glances,

observances made at every move,

following each simple shift.


I am opaque complexion, 

secrets crawling 

under my skin,

slithering like demonic possession.


I am passion

and affection at the sight of lust 

and the caress of paroxysm

tickling nerves.


I am abysmal cognition,

tempered in introspective waters,

frothing anticipation and atonement.


I am rapid flow

of emotions and intensity

grasping throats for pleasure,

bathed in aqueous matter.


I am cracking ice

and blundering fiery spasms,

disgrace shining

through fearless eyes.


I am this

for an entire lifetime.

© 2012 demureminds


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I like the description. Good to be many things in a life. You described a person with strength and powerful emotion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
great idea. really is, but some lines contradict the one before such as "i am sinful thought, and kind words of genuity" even if that is on purpose, to contradict so quickly ruins stream of your the idea you are creating. the contradictions showcase the conflict with the writer and is fantastic but so quick one after the other. its a great idea still. and elegant use of vocabulary by the way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

But a lot of times people have contradictory aspects to who they are... Like someone who you see as .. read more
awesome idea....

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

Thanks!
Deep write that states your own known potential. I absolutely admire every word of this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

thank you (:
Deep stuff...and almost song-like in its flow...awesome :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

thanks! (:
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

No problem :)
and what a uniquely special thing that is to be..

you have become one of my favorite writers, and a prolific one at that..

your style is just so fresh and articulate, and its quality really inspires one to attempt to write better..

you have a true gift my friend.. its an absolute joy looking at life through your eyes..

incredible!

Antonio :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

Thank you! (:
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Loved this! awesome write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

Thank you (:

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