Apologies

Apologies

A Poem by demureminds

Sometimes,

it’s a vague burned in imprint,

soaked in medicated ointment,

healing all your scars,

all because you believed 

someone cared enough

to toss their pride out

for you.

© 2012 demureminds


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I am baffled by your change of tone midway, nice choice in words. Believed that someone cared enough to toss their pride, or know? I love this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


demureminds

12 Years Ago

Thanks haha the original was actually a lot longer, but turned into this bc nothing else fit. Thanks.. read more
Tai Ryens

12 Years Ago

It did turn out well though, or at least by my standards. However, I don't even trust my own judgem.. read more

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demureminds
demureminds

San Diego, CA



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20. California, US. Student: Bio Major. Coffee Enthusiast. Occasional writer. Read if you please. more..

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A Poem by demureminds