Two Solitaires

Intimately composed  
of souls  
that licked 
the concrete, 
a couple, 
a pair 
too subtle, 
too rare, 
they share the air  
they breathe it 
in.

The two  
no longer two solitaires.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

The moment that two introverts meet is often full of joy for the both of them. Well done.

[demureminds]

Thanks

[kublakhan27]

A lot of mystery in a short piece...I read it a few times and I think it can go any number of ways in terms of meaning...the rhymes are worked in nicely too :)

[demureminds]

Thanks, yeah it's a little abstract haha

[kublakhan27]

Haha there's nothing wrong with that, not in the way I define poetry anyway :)