Next Time

My eyes are weary,

red rivers,

engraved in them.

My tongue, 

the taste

of alkaline

and my fears

consume my lungs.

But some day 

soon,

these tears 

will be 

nothing

but dry,

adhesive

residue.

And maybe then,

this time,

I would

find something

better 

to do.

Reviews

[Mellisa]

I like how smoothly this piece flows together. I really enjoy your style of writing.

[demureminds]

Thanks! Yeah, I tend to write without order, it's the only way I know how haha (:

[Mauricio Montoya]

like how this piece comes together, imean the words just blend right in as you read, great job well done,

[demureminds]

Thank you(:

[Mauricio Montoya]

ypu're welcome.

[....]

i enjoyed this write, full of emotions.

[demureminds]

Thanks! (:

[GreenIvy]

This is very beautiful. I love the choice of words. Well done. :)

[demureminds]

Thank you! (:

[Sami Khalil]

My eyes are weary . Red rivers.
Well penned.

[demureminds]

Thanks! (:

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Good job on your poems.