Blue Raspberry

My heart still skips a beat whenever I see you.

Your blue raspberry headphones
in both ears, make sure I know
that you don't want to talk.
You've had a long day, had too
many problems with that girl who
is all you can thing about.

 

How do you think I feel?

Reviews

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You must feel realy sad. Poem have simple message . When you are not noticed. And you want to be. Everybody knows how is feel. You create great piece.

[LC Coyle]

This is a great use of succinct writing to convey a comprehensive emotion and complicated relationship. The stanza break is effective as well. I love this!

[THERISA]

A poignant and sad poem about how we have lost the art of talking with other people. Especially, in the areas concerning the heart. Hopefully, you have found a person that you can share yourself with.

Therisa