I'm Ready
A Poem by
Bryan A.
Eh. Random.
Once again
It's my fault.
You are upset
But why?
I'm ready to beg.
Are you hurt?
Are you breaking?
Why so quiet?
Why?
I'm ready to scream.
I'll do anything,
Just please smile,
Please be happy,
Please forgive me
I'm ready to fall.
It was you
You I needed
You I wanted
You I longed for
I'm ready to love
I'm ready to hold you
I'm ready to see you
I'm ready to need you
I'm ready to breathe
I'm ready.
© 2009 Bryan A.
Author's Note
Very rough, maybe not my best, but that's how it came out, so... yeah.
Reviews
Aww, really liked this. It's nice and simple. Good structure as well. (Sorry but I'm not good at givin reviews unless I think something needs fixing or if it's on a song and I'm gessing how its sang lol)
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is very good, actually.
Sometimes I enjoy rough, raw poems more than perfectly organized ones.
This shows true emotion.
Great work!
-Elissa :D
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is very good, actually.
Sometimes I enjoy rough, raw poems more than perfectly organized ones.
This shows true emotion.
Great work!
-Elissa :D
i know this feeling but the difference is i don't really ever truely get to experience it so all i have is heartbreak. i loved it. i mean it blew my mind away.
Posted 14 Years Ago
i know this feeling but the difference is i don't really ever truely get to experience it so all i have is heartbreak. i loved it. i mean it blew my mind away.
blatantly speaking, i think of the poem as very thoughtful, its not the indirect type of poem, it just hits its topic straight.
Posted 15 Years Ago
blatantly speaking, i think of the poem as very thoughtful, its not the indirect type of poem, it just hits its topic straight.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A situation a lot of us find ourselves in.
Hurting those we care so much about. I was recently going through an experience similar to this.
Really good work, not rough at all!
I like how you ended it so cleverly, using the title there.
Great work.
Yours truly,
cloud6
Posted 15 Years Ago
A situation a lot of us find ourselves in.
Hurting those we care so much about. I was recently going through an experience similar to this.
Really good work, not rough at all!
I like how you ended it so cleverly, using the title there.
Great work.
Yours truly,
cloud6
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Rough? You kidding? This was awesome!! I mean seriously.. Who was it about? I agree.. it's one lucky girl, but not so lucky in a way...
This is awesome, I can't wait to read more!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Rough? You kidding? This was awesome!! I mean seriously.. Who was it about? I agree.. it's one lucky girl, but not so lucky in a way...
This is awesome, I can't wait to read more!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
LOL Bry you aren't a lame poet. :D
Posted 15 Years Ago
LOL Bry you aren't a lame poet. :D
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Awww who was that about? This was great! Awww she is a lucky girl!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Awww who was that about? This was great! Awww she is a lucky girl!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
this was very good and beautiful
Posted 15 Years Ago
this was very good and beautiful <3
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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My name is Bryan Alexander Freemon. I'm bored out of my mind, so I figured I'd update my bio. I'm 18 years old, my birthday is January 24. My favorite show is Supernatu..
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