I'm Ready

Eh. Random.

Once again

It's my fault.

You are upset

But why?

I'm ready to beg.

 

Are you hurt?

Are you breaking?

Why so quiet?

Why?

I'm ready to scream.

 

I'll do anything,

Just please smile,

Please be happy,

Please forgive me

I'm ready to fall.

 

It was you

You I needed

You I wanted

You I longed for

I'm ready to love

 

I'm ready to hold you

I'm ready to see you

I'm ready to need you

I'm ready to breathe

I'm ready.

Author's Note

Very rough, maybe not my best, but that's how it came out, so... yeah.

Reviews

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

Aww, really liked this. It's nice and simple. Good structure as well. (Sorry but I'm not good at givin reviews unless I think something needs fixing or if it's on a song and I'm gessing how its sang lol)

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

This is very good, actually.
Sometimes I enjoy rough, raw poems more than perfectly organized ones.
This shows true emotion.
Great work!

-Elissa :D

[MajorJesusFreak]

i know this feeling but the difference is i don't really ever truely get to experience it so all i have is heartbreak. i loved it. i mean it blew my mind away.

[IPMONER]

blatantly speaking, i think of the poem as very thoughtful, its not the indirect type of poem, it just hits its topic straight.

[Serend1p1ty]

A situation a lot of us find ourselves in.
Hurting those we care so much about. I was recently going through an experience similar to this.
Really good work, not rough at all!
I like how you ended it so cleverly, using the title there.
Great work.

Yours truly,
cloud6

[ShadowHaze]

Rough? You kidding? This was awesome!! I mean seriously.. Who was it about? I agree.. it's one lucky girl, but not so lucky in a way...


This is awesome, I can't wait to read more!

[Chelsea (Jade)]

LOL Bry you aren't a lame poet. :D

[Starting Over]

Awww who was that about? This was great! Awww she is a lucky girl!

[Taylor H]

this was very good and beautiful