Tell me

Posted at the suggestion of a very very good friend.

 

Tell me you love me, don't let me forget it

I need to hear it,

I want to feel it,

I want to feel you.

 

Tell me you need me, don't let me doubt it,

Hold me

Kiss me,

Smile for me..

 

I'll tell you I love you, you'll never forget it,

Hear me

Feel it

Feel me.

 

I'll tell you I need you, don't ever doubt it

I'll hold you,

I'll kiss you,

You're the reason I smile...
 

Reviews

[It'sLexiB47]

beautiful
very great write
cant wait to read the next
- alexis :)

[Jasmin]

I really enjoyed reading this poem, your friend gave you good advice telling you to post it

[Dionysus Cain]

nice poem, nice delivery. to the point and that makes this poem good...nice write

[XxLovexLuckyxX]

Very cute and to the point. I enjoyed reading it. :D

[hiralarious]

Loved it :D
Your writing is completely and totally AMAZING(:

[Vansgirlrocks]

aww! this poem is so
sweet! It got me in
my heart! Its such
a loving way to
tell someone that you
really love them!

[LostinKristina]

I want to thank your friend for telling you to post this.
It was spectacular! It was very sweet and heartfelt.
Such an awesome write.

[Nik Dendera]

Very sweet. No words wasted, which I like very much; you get straight to the point. It's a nice break from reading about tragedy and death.

Really enjoyed this, thanks!

[Meredith Leigh]

That's very beautiful, and writen in a way that is straight to the point, but still heartfelt.
It was a refreshing piece to write! Great job!

- Kriss

[playful>Julie xD]

I do love u, and everything bout u.