Emotions

So many emotions

Broken

Torn

Inside me.

 

So many thoughts

I can't express

Can't begin

To understand.

 

So many tears

Shed for me

Burning

Stinging.

 

The voices

Stop talking.

I'm

Lonely.

 

Someone kill me

Now.

Release me

Of this pain.

 

So many hours

Wondering,

Waiting,

Hoping I'll change.

 

So many days,

Thinking,

Crying,

Dying.

 

I'm dying inside,

I

Can't

Feel.

 

I

Can't

Breathe.

End it.

 

Let me die

Alone

Cold

Safe.

 

Don't miss me,

Don't cry

I'm gone.

I'm gone.

Author's Note

Not
My
Best.

Reviews

[Rudie Rock]

I really enjoyed this. Even if you don't think it is your best it is real. Real is good.

[Mintwhiskers]

i loved it so amazing seems like u put a lot of feelings in this
i love the way u write

[hiralarious]

This was amazing.
And if this isn't your best.. then damn, dude... well, just damn.
This is crazy good. I'm in love with it(:

[Bella]

If this is not your best, then your best must be incredible. This poem was so great! Especially the ending. So, so sad.
Good job.

[MyDearRobby]

WOH..tHiS HaS To Be oNe Of thE BeSt i'vE ReAd! I LoVe iT!

[Vansgirlrocks]

This must be the best cuz everyone is commenting this!! lol
Omg I was about to c cry! I swear!
I was so feeling the emotions!
keep it up!
and make the readers feel the emotion in
the poems!

[Starting Over]

Everytime I read this I want to cry because I can feel your pain

[Somebody you've already..]

this is very good and i like it alot. it has alot of emotion which makes up good poems. keep writing.

[Eidolon Michael]

Wow, very emotional. I hope you're not really this depressed, cuz I'll miss you if you leave...GOT IT?! Anywho, I thought this was very nice and beautiful.

[Call me Jane]

Very morbid!!! i love it