Maybe

^{I can feel your heart breaking,}

^{I can hear your breath shaking,}

^{Every word that I say}

^{Cuts you deeper each day.}

 

^{Let me dry your tears,}

^{Let me ease your fears,}

^{I can't handle your pain,}

^{I can't stand it.}

 

^{Let me take your hand,}

^{Let's walk through the sand,}

^{Hear me out,}

^{I can't take it.}

 

^{Tell me how I can fix it,}

^{I have to know,}

^{Tell me how I can heal you,}

^{I need to know.}

 

^{I need you to know what I do is for you,}

^{I want you to know every word is true,}

^{I have to show you...}

 

^{Every cut from this razor,}

^{The deepest pain,}

^{Every drop of my blood}

^{My soul's sad stain.}

 

^{I'm leaving this world tonight,}

^{I'm leaving without you,}

^{I'm leaving this pain behind}

^{Please know I love you.}

 

^{Do you see?}

^{Your name carved into me.}

^{The deepest love I can give,}

^{Eternal scars.}

 

^{Hold me tight,}

^{As long as you can,}

^{Hold me all night,}

^{Take my hand.}

 

^{Can you feel me slipping?}

^{The blood still dripping.}

^{Can you feel me gripping}

^{What's left of my love...}

 

^{Goodbye forever,}

^{Please remember me}

^{Think of me whenever,}

^{And you'll find, there I'll be.}

 

^{I love you.}

Author's Note

No good with endings, just something random I came up with. Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Eidolon Michael]

I really liked it. I especially liked this part:

"I need you to know what I do is for you
I want you to know every word is true
I have to show you..."

That part is very nice and relates to me somehow...
Well, enough of my rambling. I really liked it and would like to read more of your poems, if that's ok with you... I don't want to bother you with annoying and meaningless reviews...
P.S. The ending was perfect.

[jasmineisasianx]

amazing.

[Meredith Leigh]

That, was beautiful♥

- Kriss

[Lovesick Melody]

I really enjoyed it. good work with the rhyming. And the ending fit perfectly, it was simple and not over exaggerated. Good job!

[MyDearRobby]

WOH!I lOvE HoW U wRiTe!I wAnTeD tO crY VeRy aWeSoMe!

[DanaRegen]

Wow lovely poem, so real to the eyes of many of my piers. I thought the ending went well with the poem. very nice!

[Starting Over]

OMG that is so beautiful and sad! I can relate to this! This is just a sad romantic piece!

[justjenn_2u]

Loving and wanting to help another with results of hurting yourself. Perhaps it was just too much. Either way, your words express themselves without explanation. Good job!

[LostinKristina]

This is a perfect write.
I love reading it.
I have read it about five time today alone.
the words really speak to me.
great job.

[Kiara]

perfect poem
amazing ending
flowed effortlessly
sadness written beautifully
what more can I say :)
-arabella

[Céce]

oh my gosh, how heart-wrenching! I love this. beautiful, lyrical rhythm, and a tragic but sweet ending. perfect poem. keep it up.