Emotions

Poem about Emotions

Emotions such a mysterious thing
Quite beautiful as spring
However, it may be the opposite
Emotions that are vicious and malicious

Emotions can be described as unknown
Being changed as the winds are blown
It is bounded by limitations
Not within our expectations

Trying to understand emotions,
You will notice that it is not logical
Stuck within its vast oceans
Unable to understand its motive

Able to rationalize your feelings
It will unfold and amplify
Losing the conventional
Sense we all contain

Emotions such a thing to be bottled
It is locked, unable to open without the key
For thou to gain the key
Thou shall be able to open the bottle

Taking everything unleashed outside from bottle
You shall bare what you have seen
Not everyone is able to see what you see
Only certain people is able to get the key

Emotion is something that won't lie to you
Comparable to such colors
Colors is able to change all the time
The greatest form of art

Reviews

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... this verse explores the facets and dimensions of emotions with great attention to detail ... it zooms in and looks closely ... and it also zooms out and takes an aerial view ... well written and well rendered ... in the first stanza ... the comparison with "spring" is beautiful ... and the stark opposite is expressed well too ... in the second stanza ... the comparison with "winds" works well ... and the use of the words "limitations" and "expectations" too ... in the third stanza ... the comparison with "vast oceans" ... followed by the use of the word "motive" ... is poetic brilliance ... in the fourth stanza ... "unfold and amplify" ... is an exceptionally potent expression ... and the connection with the ability to "rationalize" is beautifully expressed ... the fifth stanza magically captures the skill involved in understanding and deciphering complex emotions ... the sixth stanza expresses well how not everyone is equally sensitive to all emotions and only a few understand them ... the seventh and last stanza compares emotions beautifully with colours and builds the connection between art and emotional expression ... for all that it says and how it says all ... this verse is truly exceptional ... however ... grammar seems to be needing some attention ... i would go with edits that change all references to the singular ... meaning that i'd replace "emotions" with "an emotion" ... i'd also recommend a review of the usage of the words "unable" and "able" in the fifth stanza ... that would be it ... all in all ... this is a truly beautiful insight into the many "colours" and shades and shapes of emotions ... great verse ... a 100 for the detailing but especially the comparisons throughout this verse ...

[SarahCortland]

This is extrememly correct. It's as if a definition through words that almost show pictures. I really love it!

[Saturn's Lover]

I loved the imagery and how you use colors to relate to emotions and the truth of them. It's a great message and i love the way you wrote it.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I liked this and the way you explain your idea of emotions.. hard to understand they are.. love the last line ... one nick

Only certain people is able to get the key-- I think is should be are?
This verse i like ..

Emotion is something that won't lie to you
Comparable to such colors
Colors is able to change all the time
The greatest form of art

Beautiful reading,
Chloe

[MissWordSmith]

this was very true, but it felt like the flow was forced. however, having said that, i agree with untoldtruth, because the fact is that you keep getting better! so good job! improvement is everything!
90/100~

[untoldtruth]

although the poem is descriptive and has great imagery, there is the problem of grammer, such as:
"Emotion is what something won't lie to you"
is it suppose to be "emotion is something that won't lie to you"?
then there is the 3rd line of that stanza that also seems wrong,
but other than that there are no flaws at all and you've made a great poem.
It seems as though every one of your new poems are getting better and better 99/100 :)