Falling Leaves

This is a poem I wrote about a guy while there was a thunderstorm going on.

Each crash of thunder

is like a beat of my chest

Each strike of lightning

is like a tear on my cheek

Each rain drop

is like my feelings

pouring out of my soul

Each falling leaf I catch

is a happy day with you

The thunder scares me

The lightning scares me

The rain scares me

The leaves are the 

only thing keeping

me with you.

Author's Note

Ignore the fact that none of it rhymes, it's not supposed to. What do you think?

Reviews

[Darksummerswind]

They way that they all represent something is pretty cool.

[....]

This is very well expressed emotions, there is some truth in this write....xo

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

thats actually cute how it all weaves and ties together. i like it.