He's So Fake

 

He’s So Fake

 

And for what!

The price of one soul,

In exchange for another?

I fail to see your logic.

To see your sight.

I wish I never chose a path.

But how can one blaze his own trial,

When he regrets?

This is where the levels come.

The splits.

In a persona of the old, and ancients.

Adapting the mental mindframe,

and taking it so far.

A scream in sunlight,

I entered Number Three.

And you still play it off,

As if you think you are truly,

The tower.

And pillar of strength.

I will make you bend.

I will make you break.

Destroy you.

Vengence is only so sweet.

And I've only just begun to find its taste.

When you drip to the floor,

thats when I won't be there.

You took it away friend.

And I got my dues.

Can I really blame you?

Not like I didn't try.

 

But I was scared, Mom.

 

Thats the split.

That one thing that makes us different.

I hate you.

Oh God I hate you.

But you fail to realize.

My torment,

pain,

collapsing lung.

I have felt your spectacle.

Your intruding lies.

 

Kill him.

 

I have been split into exactly Seven.

Guarded by a Seventeen.

You will know soon enough

when they strike.

You will feel the blood,

Before you feel the pain.

I feel you don't know what

or who

I am talking about.

 

Just F*****G die.

 

Excuse me

Excuse me.

I normally don't swear.

Level Six

is very hostile

so please excuse him.

I wish to never show him to anyone.

He will cause it to spill

faster then anyone else i know.

 

But he loves you.

 

LIAR.

 

This is how we communicate.

cutting each other down.

you paid an ulimate price.

cut me out.

kill me. please God.

But you are not to blame

don't worry.

i've seen the sea before.

 

Just be calm for once, ok?

 

I WON'T SLEEP UNTIL HE'S DEAD!

 

F*****G SHUT UP!

 

die.

die.

die.

die.

die.

 

But he loves you!

 

I WILL KILL YOU!

 

Be still.

you know not what you have become.

This music drives from your mind.

and its not pretty.

i found energy in pain.

I found things Lord.

Hidden things.

By myself.

Take him away.

 

NO!

I WILL TAKE HIM AWAY

F**K HIM

KILL HIM

DIE

DIE

DIE

.

 

but what from level Seven?

I know not of him.

He was taken from me years ago.

I locked him away first.

So I know I have backup.

 

CAN'T YOU FEEL THE ENERGY!

RELEASE HIM!

IT CAN BE YOURS!

YOUR DREAM!

YOUR FRIEND

SHALL PERISH.

DIE.

DIE.

DIE.

DIE.

 

So much hate locked away.

For only one small child.

I can't seem to find the gates

to get away from this.

I need you to purify.

 

but you love power.

like he loves you.

 

no he doesn't.

he never did.

 

F**K HIM!

 

You must be calm.

 

think this through.

 

Maybe there's another way...

 

(hidden energy deep inside resonates

to hear a cry)

 

You must become one my dear.

With no more splits.

Everything can be yours.

 

And the voice subsided.

His voice so clear

so smooth

I hated it.

Hidden power or not.

he was my true.

He was me.

He was every part of me that i loved.

 

Locked away for all these years

I can't free him from his cell

 

UNTIL HE DIES TONIGHT.

 

become one, my son

and unite.

tie me to her.

Reviews

[Taja B.]

Wow, you sure was angry when you wrote this!lol. But it's really good to get it out-believe me!

Well anyways, this is a very nice poem. It's nicely written and you've clearly shown your emotions in this piece. Plus, it was sort of painful to read-not because of the structure and quality of the poen itself-because I can clearly feel the wrath comming from this poem. It makes me glad that I'm not the person who this poem is being directed to!

Nice job.:) I really enjoyed this and I hope you have calmed down.

[PhoeniX]

wow. such strength in this piece. i wonder what arouse you to write such a strong piece of work. though i saw much anger with in the piece, it was very beautiful.

[Stonewall]

Just read this piece again and I am still blown away by its ferocity.

Line 7 you have written 'trial' in a context usually reserved for 'trail'. Was this intentional.

Awesome work.

[Shae]

Ummm...I'm a little confused! But it's a good poem! Keep writing!

[Stonewall]

Nice work, though it will take me a few more reads to decipher all the images. I like that you are able to write longer poems that are able to demand the readers attention the whole way through. The line about the sea reminds me of a game I heard of once, but have never played, called Mourir en Mer (To Die at Sea) about a disabled boy who is kept locked in his basement by his father. The aim of the game apparently is to escape so that the boy can see the sea once before he dies.

[Thief Lord Alex]

The line "I've seen the sea more than once" reminds me of a movie I just watched. This entire poem is screaming shut up and listen for once. I enjoyed it.

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

Wow. Such emotion in this piece. Excellent poem. Feeling is the water that feeds the seed of a masterpiece. Awesome. This is such a strong piece. I can feel the anger in your words. Very nice flow of words. Wonderfully written. i loved it. Great Job! ^_^

[F**K]

damn this was great.. im speechless

[Jenny Davis]

I read this as you having a good side and a bad side...One voice was the voice of calm and the other a voice of wrath. When people have been through terrible things, particularly caused by their own family, they do get this rage and I understand this. I think you needed to write this to get it all out....REALLY well expressed :)

[Mike L. Smyth]

kyle...this is a strong poem...or what ever it may be. you definetely put some emphasis on the anger aspect! its....well its different. NICE

[Sarah Williams]

Expressive, passionate and very powerful... If your goal was to open your heart and show the pain inside, the anger and the vengence, then you have succeeded beautifully! Great imagery...and I actually liked the flow, though it was a bit of a roller coaster type feel. Nicely done!