starry night

in the starry night

were words left unsaid

in the starry night

you gave me your hand

in the starry night

were stars shinning so bright

in the starry night

monsters gave me a fright

in the starry night suddenly you fled

i was alone, cold and left for dead

Reviews

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

good job:)

[John Stussy]

not a bad poem, your flow was smooth, words were simple, so the piece was easily understood. the topic was familiar enough that many can identify with the sick-feeling panic of being abandoned in such a manner. great job, keep it up.