i can see

i can see the flame

within your eyes

i can see the agony

as you cry

i can see that your heart

is broken into 2

i can see the flame

as it consumes you

i can see the great pain that your in

i can see the monster that dwells within

i can see the rage, the anger, the fight

as you stare with grief into the starry night

Reviews

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

I LOVE the imagery in this pome. Its so cool! :D

[0_o Abbie]

This is really pretty. I love the flow of this poem. The only thing I can say is when you say "into 2" I think it would work better if you said "in 2". But that's just me. It's a beautiful poem.

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

this is cute