Fifteen Years With You

Fifteen Years With You

A Poem by Aidan Cooney

I crave you.

You kill me.

I need you,

to let me be. 


You take my money,

You cause me pain,

I go back to you,

Again and again. 


I love your taste,

no matter how bad,

I come back to you,

When I get sad.


You take me back,

without any concern.

I hate you so much,

I don't want to return.


You take my breath away,

you make me depressed,

but you're great to have around,

whenever I'm stressed.


I crush you and your friends,

and throw you against walls,

I scream at the top of my lungs,

that Im done with you all. 


The screams don't come,

just choking on air,

you never pay attention,

to those sounds of despair.


I tongue your butt,

and squeeze your shaft,

Yeah, smoking's about as gay as that,

I need to quit.

I need to breath.

I need to do more than just believe.


-}:)>

 

© 2008 Aidan Cooney


Author's Note

Aidan Cooney
Don't start kids.

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Woot woot!

lol, smoking's gay.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love that the first two-thirds of the poem could be about a love gone wrong, but the end pulls you into the twist. It was clever and original. Great job. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Aidan Cooney
Aidan Cooney

Phoenix, AZ



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I am who I am. I have my problems like the rest of the world. I stopped writing down my thoughts and feelings in poem form, in any form really, since my first big relationship of almost 6 years. I wro.. more..

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A Poem by Aidan Cooney