Pep Talk

Its been a long time since I've written anything, certain things in my life have changed and I feel I need to get back some of my creativity, and so it begins...

Mind is twisted,
dreams haunting, 
numb hands,
thoughts taunting.

Fetal position,
artifitial comfort,
restless soul,
let it go.

Life moves forward,
redundant yet new,
time to focus,
on nothing but you.

Meditate and breathe,
think alot,
relieve the pressure,
untie the knots.

You're life is great,
as are you,
move forward,
to start anew.

Do not forget,
but learn from all,
be patient,
and the chips will fall.

Dont stress over everything,
it will kill you,
relief in conversation,
people listen to you.

Overcome the unbearable,
negativity will eat your heart,
no matter what you will be happy,
you've known that from the start.

So lay down now,
relax and breathe,
feel new found comfort,
in the life you will achieve. 

}:)>

Reviews

[The Musings of Mary H.]

Altogether a wonderful write! A lot of great words to live by in this!

"Dont stress over everything,
it will kill you,
relief in conversation,
people listen to you."

Mary

[King James]

I like this becasue it seems very fast paced and quick... Kinda steals your thought in a way! Good Job!

[Kara Emily Krantz]

i enjoyed this... it spoke to me, especially now, with all the thoughts that have been in my head. :)

"Life moves forward,
redundant yet new,
time to focus,
on nothing but you."

that was my favorite verse. the rhyme scheme was perfect there, and it made me sort of ::sigh:: inside.

i liked this. thanks :)

[IMOGEAN]

Very good poem.

Welcome to the Cafe...

Imogean~

[Declan Cooney]

Hell yeah man, that was slick. Stay positive!

"Dont stress over everything,
it will kill you,
relief in conversation,
people listen to you.

Overcome the unbearable,
negativity will eat your heart,
no matter what you will be happy,
you've known that from the start.

So lay down now,
relax and breathe,
feel new found comfort,
in the life you will achieve."

Good verses.