A senryu about writing senryus

Whistle while you work kids

I write Senryus 

To keep my head in this game 

Else I rust away 

Author's Note

eh

Reviews

[wordman]

lol,i need to knock off some rust ! maybe i should try

[Baby Ricochet]

They're easy. THanks ron

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, senryu's have that effect...the can really create a movement in our inspiration and words...and then the longer ones will come.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure. THank you Jacob

[Fran Marie]

Even writing short poems can improve our skills..nice

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure. Thanks Fran.

[William Liston]

Nice...I'm sure that sometimes writing short pieces can help your skills as a whole. This was kinda funny.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks William.

[streetrose]

Senyrus aren't my cup of tea, but I like it :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Streetrose

[V]

An honest and kind of blunt one though I feel it's almost a tad too straightforward for a senryu in a way. Yet nicely expressed, especially the last line.

[Baby Ricochet]

True. "Senryu gets pretty loosely defined around here.

[V]

I agree on that. Though I'm not a defender of strict forms.

[Sami Khalil]

I like the idea that if we don't practice often, we will or our minds will rust. Brilliant...:).....................

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................